小作文：柱图

大作文：Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (重复2008年5月31日)

 

朗阁名师朱雪静点评

1. 本次考试中等难度。

2. 整体分析：

Task 1：柱图

注意：：1.静态图注意分析分组依据；2.注意时态，看清时间点；3.需要在第二段或者结尾段总结差距较大的一组(overview)

相关表达：

1. 两个对象的比较

All the same/just the same as

Contrary to B，A is ….

Conversely, B is …

A is…while B is…

There are more … than … (数据1 and 数据2 respectively).

2. 倍数关系的表达

对象A+谓语+倍数+as+ 形容词 /名词+as +对象B

对象A+谓语+倍数+比较级+（名词）+than +对象B

对象A+谓语+倍数+名词+of+对象B

Task 2 综合类话题

题目翻译：一些人认为，最健康和最强大的个人和团队可以在体育运动中取得最大的成功。但其他人认为成功与心态有很大关系。讨论两种观点并给出你的观点。

从结构上来说，可以通过四段完成写作任务：

开头段：改写题目+给出个人观点

立论段：陈述身体健康强壮的重要性

驳论段：陈述运动员的心态也很重要

结尾段：总结并重申个人观点

 

Introduction:

开头段我们需要改写题目，并给出自己的观点。

In this day and age, athletes are confronted with intense competition. Meanwhile, which is of more significance, strength or mentality in race, has sparkled spirited debate. Personally, I believe genuine athletic ability prevails over mental state

在这个时代，运动员面临着激烈的竞争。与此同时，在比赛中是力量还是心态更重要，也引发了激烈的争论。就我个人而言，我相信真正的运动能力胜过精神状态。

Body 1:

Undeniably, most individuals and teams who get desirable achievement are well- trained and have authentic ability. Strength is the key determinant in sports. Firstly, there is a proverb, saying “God helps those who help themselves". By that I mean, there is no short cut in success and only constant practicing to enhance themselves can lead triumph. For instance, Beckham who is regard as the best free-kicker in the world normally practices 300 free kicks alone after general training sessions. Secondly, practice makes perfect. More precisely, the behaviors of strongest individuals in courts are based on spontaneity and habit rather than a flash in the pan. Hence. the grades they procure would not differ much between distinctive mental attitudes.

不可否认的是，大多数获得理想成就的个人和团队都经过了良好的训练，拥有真正的能力。力量是运动的关键决定因素。首先，有一句谚语说“天助自助者”。我的意思是，成功没有捷径，只有不断练习提高自己才能获得成功。例如，贝克汉姆被认为是世界上最好的任意球运动员，他通常在训练结束后单独练习300个任意球。其次，熟能生巧。更准确地说，赛场上最强大的个人的行为是自发的和习惯，而不是昙花一现。因此。他们所取得的成绩在不同的精神态度之间不会有太大的差别。。

Body 2:

Admittedly, some athletes lose the match due to weak mental state. Things like heavy psychological burden and excessive tension can deform the technical movements in race, posing a threat to athletes. Consequently, a vast number of people think mental attitude is more important on the ground of this reason. Having said this, however, decent mental state is predicated on strength. Provided that an athlete has already received vast training and possessed considerable competitiveness, he is likely to be pretty confident and less nervous.

不可否认，有些运动员由于心理状态不佳而输了比赛。沉重的心理负担和过度的紧张会使比赛中的技术动作变形，对运动员构成威胁。因此，基于这一理由，许多人认为精神态度更为重要。话虽如此，良好的精神状态是建立在力量的基础上的。如果一个运动员已经接受了大量的训练，并具有相当的竞争力，他可能会相当自信，不那么紧张。

Conclusion:

Having considered all the arguments above, I believe genuine strength is imperative in competitive sports. No doubt mentality is an influencing factor but it hinges on strength. For athletics themselves, they would be well-advised to be industrious in order to enhance themselves.

考虑到以上所有的论点，我认为真正的力量在竞技体育中是必不可少的。心态无疑是一个影响因素，但它取决于力量。对于体育运动本身来说，他们应该勤奋以提高自己。

 

考试预测

1.小作文：重点关注动态图和流程图。

2.大作文：重点关注媒体类、社会类及政府职能类话题。

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