小作文：流程图

大作文：Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?  

朗阁讲师张姝姝点评：

1. 本次考试难度中等。

2. 整体分析：

Task 1：流程图

注意：：1.注意用一般现在时描写；2.动词之间的衔接；3. 流程图常用句型并列句状语从句等

相关表达：

1. 定语从句的写法

At the first stage, the fruit is picked from the trees by hand and then transported to the cannery by large trucks, where the fruit is washed.

2. 时间状语从句的写法

After quality of the fruit is checked, and every poor-quality fruit is rejected, the good-quality fruit is put into cold storage.

3. 条件状语从句的写法

Once the cans have been filled, they are sealed and cooked over heat to ensure that the cans are sterilized.

Task 2 教育类话题

题目翻译：孩子开始上学后，老师比家长在孩子们的智力和社交发展上影响更大。 你是否同意？

开头段：改写题目+表达个人观点

让步段：承认学校老师的作用：教授学术科目，培养孩子独立性和合作精神。

立段：支持家长在培养孩子智力发展上作用更大。

立段：支持家长在培养孩子的社交关系上作用更大。

结尾段： 总结。

 

Arguments for the statement：

1. 不可否认的是，老师对学校的学生都有很大影响。这个影响不仅包括学术科目的教学，还包括社交技能的培养。

There is no doubt that teachers have a very significant impact on all of the school students. This impact involves not only the teaching of particular academic skills, but also importantly, the fostering of social skills.

 Arguments against the statement：

1. 家长在培养学生学习习惯和获得学习资源方面有更加重要的作用。很多研究显示在学习中，家长参与度高的学生更加有可能获得好的成绩。

Parents play a more influential role in helping students foster regular learning habit and accessing high- level learning resources. Many studies have shown that children with a higher parents’ involvement in their studies, are more likely to earn higher grades and test scores.

2. 家长的参与在家庭和在学校环境中都能够培养孩子们自我意识和沟通能力。

Parents’ participation may facilitate the development of self-awareness and communication skills across home and school.  

考试预测：

 

1.小作文：重点关注线图和表格。

2.大作文：重点关注犯罪类、环保、政府话题。

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