小作文：动态柱状图，澳大利亚三个州使用土地和树的数量对比

大作文：In some cultures the old age is more valued,while in some cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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1.简要评价：

本次考试Task1是动态柱图，绝对的高频考题，难度不大。图表呈现了澳大利亚三个州使用土地和树的数量对比。Task 2 Discussion题型，社会人口话题。

2. 整体分析：

Task 1：

动态图关注变化趋势以及各分组信息的对比关系。

注意点：1.注意时态；2.注意同义替换；3. 注意不同对象切换需要有衔接。

补充：描述变化的相关表达：

l The period … witnessed an upward trend from… in…

l A similar trend was found in… from…to数据…

l A diverse trend was found in… from… to….

l Starting at…, the amount of … increased sharply to…

l The number of…outlined an upward trend, with a sharp increase from… to…

Task 2: 社会人口类话题

题目翻译：某些文化环境更重视老年人而有些文化则更关注看重年轻人，讨论两方观点并给出自己观点。

思路提示：

建议中立立场，

首段：话题背景，在不同的社会和文化背景下(under diverse social and cultural circumstances), 公众对老年人和年轻人的重视度有所不同(people from dissimilar backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards the same issue with respect to the value of the old and youth respectively.)必须承认，双方都各有价值和优点。(Admittedly,there are merits concerning both sides.)

Body1：指明老年人的价值和优势

饱经风霜(Having experienced and endured all the hardships of life);富有经验，知识广博(sufficiently experienced and well knowledged)；有丰富的人生观和价值观(abundant philosophy , social values and outlook on life); 社会责任感强(strong sense of social responsibility)。另外，考虑社会重视老年人群体是因为：充分开发老年资源(Well explore the resources of the old)，提高老年人生命和生活质量，构建和谐社会，实行积极的老龄化对策:健康、参与和保障。(enhance the life expectancy and standard to construct a harmonious society which promotes the coordinate growth of economy and sustainable development as well,with the implement of positive countermeasure involving health, participation and ensurance.)

Body2：指明年轻人的价值和优势

善于学习和接受新事物、新想法(be adept in learning and adopting up-to-date objects and notions.；接受了更好的教育，有竞争意识和合作意识，( better cultivated, with competitive and cooperative spirit)；熟知科技知识，善于沟通交流(well-informed of advanced technology, skillful in communication)；给社会发展注入新的动力和提供更广阔的空间(novel motive power for social advancement with a wider range)

结尾：各自有不能比拟的优点和不可取代的价值，不应差异对待

 

On account of the incomparable advantages and irreplaceable value possessed by the old and youth respectively, special importance deserves to be attached to both accordingly to an identical extent rather than prejudiced.

考试预测

1.小作文：重点关注动态图（柱图、饼图）、静态图（柱图、表格为次重点，适当关注流程图）。

2.大作文：媒体广告类、科技影响类、社会热点话题类仍然是关注的重点，同时政府决策类是次重点。

 

3.重点浏览2016-2017年的写作机经，可借助《高分范文书》第7和第8版经典旧题来复习话题思路，同时参考考官范文来复习结构和语言。

 

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