小作文: 静态柱图
大作文:These an increasing number of people in many cities know little about their neighbors and do not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what solutions can you suggest?
朗阁名师植正洋点评:
Task 1:静态柱图,描述了6个国家primary school和lower secondary school的班级规模。
注意:此次小作文属于常规图表题,主要写数据信息的大小比较。建议按照世界平均值划分,高于平均值的和低于平局值的分别表述,分段可以按照图表里的两类,分成primary school和secondary school两段。
相关表达:
1、A is +形容词比较级+than B
2、A is +倍数+as+形容词原级+as B
3、(将A的数据表达清楚),followed by B and then C
4、(将A和B进行比较),and C the least
5、 account for/ represent/ consist of/ be composed of 等占比句型
6、As to / Turning to / In terms of …等过渡、切换
Task 2: 交通设施
题目翻译:现在人们很少认识或了解身边的邻居,大家缺乏“社群感”,分析原因,给出建议。
题目解析:今天的作文是比较典型的report题型,问了原因和解决建议,文章分段非常清晰,每个问题各自回应一段,开头段适当交代话题背景即可。
原因:
一、现代城市建筑构造(公寓楼)导致人们感觉被隔绝(Modern people tend to live in blocks of apartment where there are few public places to hold group activities.) 邻里互相之间没有机会交流(feel isolated and have no chance to communicate with neighbors)。
二、社会节奏更快,人们忙于工作(have a heavy workload);并且住所灵活,经常搬家,缺乏与邻居的交流与了解(moving and relocating their households also reduces the time of having a light conversation with their neighbors.);
三、现代娱乐形式多种多样(various forms of entertainment),缺乏邻里互动(few people would like to spend time taking a stroll in the community)。
解决建议:解决方法建议说的具体点。
例如:住宅建筑里引入公共活动空间,促进居民参与社区活动,互相了解;
多花时间与邻居们交流沟通;
社区定期组织活动,活跃邻里关系等。
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