小作文：线图，在英国的三种婚姻形式

大作文：Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?（2013年12月14日旧题）

 

 朗阁名师杨钰点评 

 

1.本次考试难度较低。

2.整体分析：

Task 1：动态线图：英国三种婚姻形式。

注意：1. 动态图，着重抓住趋势变化；2.注意时间对应的时态选择；3. 图表中的数据不需要都提及，注意数据的整合。

相关表达：

1、What is worth mentioning is that the marriage forms of… in the UK increased/decreased drastically by+数据

2、As shown in the graph, the year XXXX experienced a considerable drop/growth in...., with a decline/rise of+数据.

3、There was a minimal rise/fall in .... during the period shown in the question, which grew/ dropped from... to ....

4、However, xx showed a different picture.

 

3.Task 2 社会+年轻人话题

题目翻译：年轻人为了学习或者工作背井离乡到大城市去。为什么会有这种现象的发生？这个现象的优点大于缺点吗？

从话题上来说，属于社会+年轻人类，考生可以运用平时对此话题的积累加以论证。

从类型上来说，属于混合类（原因分析+利弊分析），考生只要针对题目依次回答，言之有理即可。

从结构上来说，可以采取四段式的写法：

第一段：题目改写。

第二段：解释现象发生的原因。

第三段：探讨该现象的利弊。

第四段：总结段。

 

主体段 1:

现象发生的原因：

1. 大城市的工作机会多：The economic conditions in big cities are generally better than those in small towns, in return, attracts more investment from commercial corporations. As a result, compared with most of small towns, there are always more modern and international enterprises which can offer the youngsters numerous job opportunities.

2. 城市中有更多学习资源：It is undeniable that young people are more likely to get access to abundant knowledge in the city instead of countryside, because schools in the city are generally equipped with more favorable resources for learning, such as libraries.

 

主体段 2:

现象的利弊：

 

城市过于拥挤带来就业竞争及环境破坏: One negative influence of this rural-to-urban shift may be overcrowding in cities. The ever-increasing population in cities means a more competitive working environment for young people. To put it another way, fewer job opportunities would be available in the labor market. Also, this trend would definitely put pressure on the environment, and therefore have a negative implication on our living standards. 

 

 考试预测 

 

1.小作文：重点关注表格、饼图（重点关注静态图）。

2.大作文：重点关注科技媒体、教育文化话题。

3.重点浏览2015-2016年写作机经，可借助《高分范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。

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