2017年5月13日托福考试写作回顾 |
综合写作: 古埃及建shaft的原因 独立写作: Which value is the most important should be shared by a young child (at least 5-10 years old) and why? 1. being honest 2. being helpful for others 3. being well-organized |
朗阁讲师吴瑾点评
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综合写作: 阅读:古埃及建shaft的原因: 1. 通风; 2. 对应星星的位置,宗教; 3. 国王死后的灵魂通过。
听力反驳: 1. 有两种shaft,但功能并不都是通风; 2. tomb是早期建的,那时候还没有对星星的迷信; 3. 古埃及人相信灵魂可以穿过墙,所以没必要。
独立写作: 从15年开始,三选一的题目逐渐变成了ETS新宠,在上上周刚考完一次三选一之后,本周又迎来了一次三选一的题目。考生们在答题时要比较选择三个对象,做出自己的回答。笔者选择being well-organized给考生们一个参考答案: 1. Learning to be organized可以让孩子逐渐适应their increasingly complex lives。因为学会有条理得规划自己要做的事,比如知道自己写完作业才可以去看喜欢的电视节目,孩子会变得越发自律self-disciplined。随着年龄的增长,他们所学的科目逐渐增多,要参加的考试,要完成的projects也逐渐增多,但是从小懂得put things in order能让他们to be competitive in face of future challenges.
2. 诚实和乐于助人自然也是两种非常重要的品质。毕竟诚实是the foundation of getting along with others,乐于助人也可以让孩子win over more friends,但是这两种values其实应该从更小的时候就开始being instilled in,对于5-10岁的primary school students来说,他们更多地应该开始being taught to deal with different tasks orderly,这其实是在孩子上小学之前很少被训练过的,老师和家长会帮孩子做大部分事情。
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考试预测 |
1. 注意教育类话题与社会类话题 2. It is important to make sure that others know about your strengths and accomplishments; if you are not so, you will be never successful in life. 3. Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries. |